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Band 5+: Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. - Introduce yourself - Describe problems you are facing because of this - Suggest solutions

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Dear Sir.

I am Harshil and living at vidhyanagar, odhav. I am writing this letter to complain about your new office which is constructing next to my apartment.

The main problem i’m facing is your workers dump bricks and cement in front of my house door that creates inconvenience for me to park my vehicles. Secondly, Workers spilled so much water on the ground and because of that surface become slippery and my parents have to walk so much precisely. Last but not least, workers play very loud music. Due to this noise, my children could not focus on their studies.

I would suggest that bricks and cement could place at the back of the building. Water supplies should use through proper pipelines and loud music volume could be adjusted at some imperative level.

I strongly feel that you will resolve this issues immediately.

Yours faithfully,

Harshil.

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The issues are clearly stated, and solutions are proposed. Minor improvements in clarity and structure would elevate the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some improvements in sentence structure and flow would enhance the overall coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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