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Band 5+: Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. ★ Describe the situation you are facing ★ why do you consider it a problem. ★ what change you would like to recommend

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Dear sir,

My name is Divyang Bansu and I live in the mountain area of Hamilton city, Ontario. I am writing this letter to request you to increase public transport bus frequencies in our area.

I have been living in Stoney Creek for last 4 years. It is a beautiful area to live in especially with nature and peaceful environment. However, the bus frequency in our area is very low. The buses are scheduled for every 45 minutes and during weekend, the time goes up to 1 hour. It is not feasible for people live in this area. It is undeniable fact that this area was developed few of years ago. The new construction is going on every month to develop this area.

I would like to make a request to you to increase the frequency of buses by every 20 to 30 minutes. We would love to have more bus stands to make it convenient for children and elderly people. I have seen multiple city has E-bicycle stands to ride short-distances. This changes and improvements can help us to commute more comfortably.

Warm regards,

Divyang Bansu

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Overall Band Score

5.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
every: 3
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Task Response

6.5
The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The problem is clearly described, and a reasonable solution is proposed. Minor improvements could enhance the overall response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5
The letter's message is mostly clear. However, some improvements in logical flow and paragraph structure would enhance readability and cohesion. The grammar errors affect the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. While the range is sufficient, incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that detract from the overall clarity and impact. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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