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Band 4+: Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding to i have missed my things in your cinema theatre. i came at 6.30 pm for anjaan show on silver section with my friend. that time i was missed my luxury jacket at here after end of movie.

the jacket is dark-black,media-sized latherd with a zippered front and two side pockets. especially, it also has adidas log on middle of left side pocket.i was seated in the fifth row from the front and seat number was 26 and 27. i remember leaving it on the seat as i exited the cinema.

could you please check it that place if you find or any information about my jacket please contact my personal number and i will receive quickly from you. Sorry for my mistake.

i look forward your prompt responses.

sincerally,

s.manchuthan

Word Count: 141

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

jacket: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, describing the jacket, seating location, and desired action. However, the language contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which slightly detracts from the overall quality. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary and proofreading for grammatical accuracy. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of information could be improved. Consider using more effective transitions between sentences and paragraphs to guide the reader. For example, when transitioning from describing the jacket to your seating location, a clearer connection could be established. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. For instance, instead of 'luxury jacket,' consider more descriptive alternatives like 'expensive leather jacket' or 'designer jacket.' Varying your word choice and using more specific vocabulary will enhance the impact of your letter. Also, 'latherd' should be 'leathered'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. For example, 'regarding to i have missed my things' should be 'regarding my lost jacket.' Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors. Also, 'sincerally' should be 'sincerely'.

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