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Band 4+: Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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To whom it may concern.

Hello, my name is Valentina. I am writing this letter because yesterday I was to the cinema and I left my jacket so I need to know if anyone found and save it.

I watched a comedy movie in room seven. I seated with my sister on the center of the middle line. Is a leather jacket, their color is black and have a red flower detail in the back.

Please, this jacket gave it to me my grandmother in my last birthday therefore will be sad if I don’t find it.

I live in the outskirts of the city so the cinema is far to my house. But, if you have my jacket, I will go to look for it

Finally, here is my personal phone number to tell me if you have any news 2302340249.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Many thanks.

Word Count: 151

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

jacket: 4

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by describing the jacket and where the writer was seated. However, it lacks clarity in requesting what needs to be done about the lost jacket. It would be better to explicitly ask the manager to check if the jacket has been found and to keep it safe until the writer can retrieve it.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks proper organization. It would benefit from a clearer structure with distinct paragraphs for each main point. Additionally, some sentences are abrupt and could be connected more smoothly for better flow.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary, but some words are repetitive, and there are errors in word choice and phrasing. More sophisticated and accurate vocabulary could enhance the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates basic grammatical accuracy with some errors in verb tenses, sentence structure, and punctuation. To improve, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, use of articles, and sentence construction.

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