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Band 4+: Write a letter to your cousin about your favorite hobby.

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Hi, Temirlan!

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing because I want to tell about my favourite hobby and give you advices about my hobby.

My favourite hobby is play, I started play football when I was 4 years old. My mother sent me to the football section.

Additionally, I usually play football at Monday and Thursday because at that day I have a football time with my classmates. These days games are really cool.

I want to give you advice, when you play football you need to play safely .

I enjoy play football because it is very popular sport in the world , and like play football because that sport a very amazing.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

football: 7

because: 4

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Task Response

4.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by describing the writer's favorite hobby. However, more detail and development would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and organizational issues. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is simple and repetitive. Expanding vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Focusing on grammar rules and sentence construction is crucial for improvement.

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