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Band 6+: Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Describe why you are having the party - Give directions on how to get to the venue - Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

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Dear Kate

Hello, I hope you are well. My reason for writing is to invite you to a birthday party.

You already know that my birthday is coming up on 8th June. My parents have decided to hold a party on that day.

Being my dear and best friend since our childhood,i would be glad to see you at this event. Your presence will make this day special and memorable.

We have planned to celebrate this event by playing exciting games, having a barbecue and eating delicious meals. There will also be interesting competitions, dancing and karaoke too. It will make this party more enjoyable.I am sure that we will have a great time together, sharing laughter and talking about different topics. I really hope that you will participate!

Here are a few directions so you do not get lost. Steven Bernson, Attorney at Law

1556 Broadway, Suite 416

New York, NY, 10120, USA

I would be grateful if you could join us. See you then!

Yours sincerely

Word Count: 168

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. However, the directions provided are insufficient and seem to be an address rather than directions to the venue. More detail is needed here.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some improvements in paragraphing and flow would enhance readability. The inclusion of an unrelated address disrupts the coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, showing a good range of expression. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used in places to enhance the overall effect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, there are some errors that affect the overall fluency and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the score.

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