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Band 5+: Write a letter to your friend offering her concert ticket

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Dear Raman

Hello, how are you? I hope you are doing great. It’s been so long that we have not hanged out together and i miss you so much. I have an exciting news for you! I have got two concert tickets for us both so that we can enjoy and do fun.

The concert is of your favourite singer Karan Aujla. I remember how you use to talk about him all the day. It’s a great opportunity yo watch your favourite singer singing in front of you. The concert consist of all his albums from start.

On 28th october 2024, he will be coming Chandigarh and on 29th october at 08:00 pm the show will began. You can come at my house in the morning so that we can get ready. The concert will held on sector 17 near the big fountain.

I know you are gonna love this idea. Your favourite song will also be sung by him. We will make great memories together as it is our first ever concert that we are gonna attend together.

I am eagerly waiting for your reply.

Your loving friend,

Sakshi

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Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

concert: 5

great: 3

favourite: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses the task by offering the concert ticket. However, some aspects of the task could be more fully addressed for a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors detract from the overall quality and clarity of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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