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Band 5+: write a letter to your friend to ask her to take care of your children while you are away for a business trip. Tell her -what food do they love to eat? -what activities they like to do? -what arrangements you have made to pick them

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Dear friend,

Thanks a lot for taking care of my children ,at the time I most needed. It will be now very easy for me to travel without difficulties that children make during trip.

Moreover, there are some recommendations of food they like to have, Mostly in the breakfast they are fond of milk and wholewheat breads with jam. However , in kunch they can have biscuits with tea but in the dinner they love to eat heavy food like chappatis with vegetables.

Additionally, some activities that you can take them when they will miss me or making difficulties for you. For instance, you can take them to nearby playgrounds ot at the shopping centres.Lastly, it will not be a long trip, I will be back in 2-3 days. So my wife will pick the children in the morning, before she comes iwill let you know on phone call.

Best wishes,

Ravinder singh

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