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Band 5+: Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – what you will do when if it will be not helpful.

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Dear Krishna,

My name is Aakash, and I am your next door neighbour who just moved in, I am writing this to request something from your side, I noticed that you have a dog and he’s always without the leash in the frontyard even at nights, adding to this, he’s always barking at nights and also when he finds my kids playing making them feel unsafe, and leading them to stay at home.

I kindly suggest you to keep a leash on him when my kids are playing and also to move him in your backyard at night as we are not able to get proper sleep due to his barking resulting us being sleep deprived in the morning, Yesterday my kids were playing in the front yard and your dog approched them climbing the fence wanting them to bite.

I hope we can resolve this issue as early as possible, you can contact me anytime if you want, no harsh feelings. I am very thankfull for your kindness.

Yours sincerely,

Aakash

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

playing: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The request is clear, and the tone is polite. However, the structure could be improved for better clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the numerous grammatical errors and slightly disjointed structure affect the overall flow and coherence. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but there's room for improvement in word choice and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that impact clarity and fluency. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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