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Band 5+: Write an informal letter to your friend, describing your recent experience at a local event or festival. In your letter, include: 1. The event or festival you attended. 2. What activities or performances took place. 3. Your feelings about the event. 4. Invite your friend to attend the event with you next time.

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Dear Achini,

How are you doing? I hope everything is fine. I am writing to this letter recent experience at a local festival.

I attended to Sinhala and Tamil New Year festival on April in the Senanayaka Play Ground.

The festival had to more activites icluding a pillow fighting game, break water-filled pots, climbing a greasy pole, count to papaya seeds, a game of tug-of-war and a bun eating a contest but I attended to break water-pilled pots and a game of tug-of-war.

I was very enjoyable this day and vey intersting game. Moreover, I recived to 1st place. I was very happy. I recived one rice cooker, a asus laptop and certificate.

I will invite you attend the event next year Sinhala and Tamil New Year festival.

We can do enjoy. I hope you come. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Dulanjani.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the event and activities is clear, and the invitation is explicit. Minor improvements in organization and clarity would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and cohesion. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for an informal letter, but the range could be expanded. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's descriptive power and sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that impact clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure is crucial for a higher score.

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