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Band 7+: WRITING TASK 1 1. You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter 2. • explain your situation 3. • describe your problems 4. • tell him/her when you think you can start. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.

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Dear Mr. Petrov,

A month ago, I applied for a job as a lawyer. We had an interview; everything was well. You admitted that I am a conscientious and ambitious person. You offered to start my work on September 25th. It was a convenient time for me; unfortunately, I have some changes.

As I’m a Ukrainian citizen, I have to pass the English test for a United Kingdom visa. This year, I saw that in my country I can’t take this exam; Under such circumstances I must take the test in another country. That’s why, I’m going to take this test in Romania and it will take me for a week.

However, I think that I will be ready on October 3rd. By this time, I believe that I will get the visa and get back to London. Thank you for your understanding.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Alexander Ivanov

Word Count: 154

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the situation, describing the problems, and stating when the writer expects to start. There are a few minor areas for improvement. For instance, elaborating slightly more on the impact of the delay on the employer or offering alternative solutions could enhance the response. Also, ensure consistent formality throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the message is clear. However, some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve the flow. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to enhance the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and varied vocabulary related to the context of employment and visa applications.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. Pay attention to sentence structure and verb tense consistency to improve accuracy. For example, review the use of articles and prepositions for better clarity.

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