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Band 5+: Writing Task 1, using information from the charts in the image

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The image contains two bar charts. The left chart, US honey-bee colonies 1970–2010, shows: 1970 at 4 million, 1980 at 4.2 million, 1990 at 3.5 million, 2000 at 2.7 million, 2010 at 1.8 million. The right chart, US honey production 1970–2010, presents: 1970 at 130,000 tonnes, 1980 at 110,000 tonnes, 1990 at 100,000 tonnes, 2000 at 90,000 tonnes, 2010 at 70,000 tonnes.

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The bar charts provide information about honey-bee colonies and honey yield in the United States from 1970 to 2010.

Overall, there is a steady fall in honey-be colonies from 1980 to 2010. Also the number of honey-bee colonies was at its’ peak in 1980. Even if the number of honey production had pursued by fluctuating, the bar chart shows us there was a dramatic decline between 2000 and 2010.

From 1970 to 1980, the number of honey-bee colonies was approximately 4 and 4.5 millions. Nevertheless, it had started to decrease one million after 1980 and continue to decline steadily until 2010. The number of honey-bee colonies was at its’ lowest level, with approximately 1.5 million colonies.

Honey production of US had continued by fluctuating between 1970 and 1990. From 70s’ to 90s’ the number of honey production declined from 130.000 to 110.000 and it rose 120.000 again. After 1990, there was steady decrease until 2010. It declined from 120.000 to 70.000 in 20 years.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

colonies: 5

number: 5

honey-bee: 4

honey: 3

there: 3

production: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the data and provides relevant information from both charts. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report mentions a rise to 120,000 tonnes of honey production, which isn't quite accurate according to the provided data. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately represented and consider adding more specific comparisons between the two charts to enhance the analysis.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the flow could be improved. The organization into paragraphs is acceptable, but the transitions between sentences and ideas within paragraphs could be smoother. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more effectively. For example, using 'However' or 'In contrast' to highlight differences, or 'Similarly' to show parallels.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While words like 'steady fall' and 'dramatic decline' are used, consider incorporating more specific and sophisticated vocabulary to describe trends and quantities. For example, instead of 'decrease,' you could use 'diminish,' 'plummet,' or 'contract.' Also, try to avoid repeating the same words and phrases too frequently. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and the use of articles. For example, 'honey-be colonies' should be 'honey-bee colonies,' and 'was at its' peak' should be 'was at its peak.' Pay close attention to these fundamental grammar rules to enhance the accuracy and readability of your writing. Proofreading carefully is essential.

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