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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place • ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work • ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

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Dear samado,

I hope this email find you well,i m writing to ask about the festival you are volunteering at ,i was wondering if you could describe me what type of festivals it is and when it starts moreovre I would be grateful if you inform me where it will be.

Furthermore, i thought you will be able to tell me what are your main tasks and if you are enjoying this work and do youfind some difficulties. As i m interested by this idea i would appreciate it if you could give me some informations and precisions about having the chance to register as a volunteer yet and how can i do that.

Thanks in advance for helping me out ,looking forward to your kind reply.

Best wishes,

Djihene.

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, demonstrating a clear understanding of the requirements. The questions are relevant and naturally integrated, and the overall tone is appropriate for a friendly letter. Excellent work! The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping your questions more logically and using clearer transitions between topics. For example, keep all questions about the festival's details together before moving on to your friend's tasks and then to volunteering opportunities. Paragraphing is adequate, but could be more effective with clearer topic sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'inform me,' you could use alternatives like 'provide details' or 'let me know.' Expanding your range of vocabulary will make your writing more engaging and effective.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of punctuation. For example, 'I hope this email find you well' should be 'I hope this email finds you well,' and 'describe me what type of festivals it is' should be rephrased for better clarity. Proofreading carefully will help catch these errors.

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