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Band 6+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email give details of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my extreme dissatisfaction in regards to my recent purchase from your website. About a week ago I bought a pair of baggy jeans from your newest collection, planning to give them as a present to my niece for her birthday, however, when I finally got my delivery, I realised that clothes were in an inappropriate condition.

First and foremost, the coverage of my package was severely damaged, and moreover, I am inclined to think that someone from your delivery service tried to wear the jeans, apparently because of this fact the material was pricked in several areas. And, last but not least, additional buttons for this jeans were absent in the delivery, even though they were in a basket on your website during purchasing.

I would be grateful if you could replace my order before the 10th of July, so I would not disappoint my niece. Thank you for your understanding and assistance.

Yours faithfully,

Anton Kononenko

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

jeans: 3

delivery: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and detail would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure is generally clear. Improving the flow and sentence structure would enhance readability and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter is understandable, grammatical accuracy and sentence structure could be improved for greater clarity and impact.

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