Letter

Band 5+: You and a neighbor are planning to organize a street cleanup event in your locality. Write a letter to your neighbor discussing the arrangements for the event. Include the following: - Suggest a date and time for the cleanup - Discuss the materials needed and who will provide them - Suggest how to inform other neighbors about the event

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear neighbours

I am writing this letter to invite you to a neighborhood cleanup,I would be delighted for you and your husband to join us in making the area a safe and clean enviornment for our community to live in.The meet up spot will be at the community center on ohms street at 8:00am in the morning on Saturday.I will have all the resources that you would need to participate but I would suggest bringing extra gloves and plastic bags in case of accidental tears. Helping our town will not only help our enviornment it will also bring our community closer together.

Thank you

From your neighbor

Word Count: 107

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

community: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by inviting neighbors to a cleanup day, explaining its importance, providing details about the event, and suggesting items to bring. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific details about the tasks involved and elaborating on the positive impact of the cleanup. Additionally, the tone could be more persuasive and engaging to encourage greater participation. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and transitions between ideas. For example, separating the invitation, details, and suggestions into distinct paragraphs would enhance readability. Also, avoid run-on sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task. Consider using more varied and specific vocabulary related to environmental cleanup and community involvement to elevate the language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay closer attention to punctuation (especially commas), sentence structure, and correct word usage. Review basic grammar rules to improve accuracy.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

they have been several accidents near your street recently write a letter to the local Transport authority in your letter explain the situation describe why the area is dangerous suggest safety measures that should be introduced

Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your attention a severe and urgent road safety issue on Al-Ghubra street. Over the past few weeks, there have been several serious traffic accidents in this immediate vicinity, raising significant concerns among the local residents regarding our daily safety. The primary reason this area has become highly […]

Band 8+

See All