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Band 4+: You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Sir/Madam,

My Name is Muhamad Yogi Nanda, the people who are living in your rented accomodation in an English speaking country. I am writing this letter regarding the accomodation I was lived. and then, I would like to complain to you about the accomodation I am not satisfied in it. such as, Air conditioning system hot, the toilet is clogged, and there is no have the dining table. Therefore, I have some suggestions to solve this problem. so, you are not receive any complain letter anymore with Providing and makesure the furniture at your rent house are completed and ready to use before you try to advertise your rent house.

You can try to makesure your accomodation has completed and ready for use. such as providing the dining table, sofa, air conditioning, bathroom, etc. I ensure you do not have any complain letter anymore because the accomodation has completed and ready for use.

I hope you will consider this problem and try to fix my problem in your propherty, it is all of my complained and suggestions that I have. thank you very much in advances

Warm Regards,

Muhamad Yogi Nanda

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

accomodation: 5

letter: 3

complain: 3

problem: 3

completed: 3

ready: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. The main points are present but could be structured more effectively for better understanding.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's coherence is negatively impacted by grammatical errors and organizational issues. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance flow and readability.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the overall clarity and impact of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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