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Band 5+: You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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Dear Sir,

My name is Harmandeep Kaur. I and my parents moved to Canada recently to start our new business of sewing and clothing alternation.

I am writing this letter to you to find a house for the three of us. We need the property in Brampton, near Sheridan College as we are establishing our business over there. So, it would be easy for us to get to work. We need the house on the rent and our budget is $ 3500 per month including utilities. We are looking for 3 bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a big kitchen, laundry room and many more facilities in the house.

I request you to provide the listings of the rental houses in the preferred area of the city and also mention the rent of the house on my contact number.

I will look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully

Harmandeep Kaur

Word Count: 148

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task well by introducing the writer and their family, describing the type of accommodation needed, and stating the preferred location. To improve, consider expanding on why the specific features are important and how they will contribute to the family's business and lifestyle in Canada. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the budget and the desired features of the house. Consider smoother transitions between ideas for better cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some phrases could be more varied and sophisticated. Try to incorporate more diverse vocabulary to enhance lexical resource. Additionally, pay attention to word choice and accuracy to further improve.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures and generally accurate grammar. However, there are some punctuation errors and minor grammatical mistakes that could be corrected for a higher score. Proofreading for these errors is recommended.

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