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Band 5+: You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:- - What activities you have planned - When the first meeting takes place and where

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Dear Mr. Parth,

Hope this letter finds you radiant healthy and full of spirits. I’m writing this letter to request you to publish my planned event in your newspaper to be aware of it to all the nationality live in Canada.

As we have seen in Canada, New immigrants are increasing tremendously from all around the world where some of them are native English speakers and some of them are not. Moreover, Coming to a new English-speaking country would be difficult for people who do not have English as the primary language in their nation. Therefore, I have decided to organize online classes when most people are free and can easily attend the class as it is online. This class will teach you the basic English level to the mastery level. Not only that, It will also help you to communicate in English with other people who might have different accents. In addition, you can make new friends too.

This event will be an online Zoom meeting every day at 7 pm only for the people who live in Canada. The class will last 1 hour which is enough for the day to practice English. Now no more wasting time on travelling. Just register using this website and you will get the Zoom link 5 minutes before the class starts.

hoping to see you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Kavid

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
english: 5
people: 4
class: 4
online: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

4.5
The letter addresses the task by requesting the editor to publish information about the planned social meetings for people of different nationalities. However, the specific activities planned and the details about the first meeting are not clearly mentioned. It would be beneficial to provide more specific information about the activities and the exact date and location of the first meeting.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the planned activities and the details of the first meeting. Paragraphing is adequate but could be improved for better organization of ideas.

Lexical Resource

5
There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter. However, some expressions could be more precise and natural. Additionally, there are instances of awkward phrasing and repetitive use of certain words ('English' is repeated multiple times). To enhance lexical resource, aim for more varied and sophisticated vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors in sentence structure and tense consistency. Punctuation is generally used correctly, but there are instances of missing commas and awkward phrasing. To improve grammatical accuracy, pay attention to sentence structure and ensure consistency in verb tenses.

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