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Band 5+: You are an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Luis

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Dear Luis,

I am writing to express my idea to show a well-known food from Indonesia in the event and as a member of Melati International Students’ club. Its name is bakso wonogiri and the reason why I offer this menu because my parents have a lot of meatball restaurants, which mean they are expert to cook in this food.

I would like to describe regarding bakso wonogiri. This dish is extremely delicious and just available in on of city in my nation. Bakso wonogiri has a lot of compositions such as mustard, rice noodle, celery, and the main composition is meatball. This dish will be suitable if you consume in rainy season.

The reasons why it should be included in the event are have a lot of considerations. Firstly, this food is specific food from Indonesia, which means other countries do not exist. Secondly, this menu has won the best delicious local food in the word. I hope you can find this suggestion helpful.

I look forward to your positive response.

Best regards,

Fauziah Yumna

Word Count: 176

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

bakso: 3

wonogiri: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by offering to make a dish, describing it, and explaining why it should be included. There are some minor lapses in providing sufficient detail and clarity in certain areas. To improve, provide more specific details about the dish's ingredients and preparation, and elaborate on why it's a good choice for the event.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on each point (offering the dish, describing it, and explaining why it should be included), and a conclusion. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) would also enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more varied and precise language to describe the dish and its significance. For example, instead of saying "has a lot of compositions," you could say "consists of various ingredients." Also, avoid informal language like "menu" when referring to a specific dish.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage (e.g., "in on of city" should be "in one city"), and sentence structure. For example, "the reason why I offer this menu because my parents have a lot of meatball restaurants" is grammatically incorrect and could be rephrased for better clarity.

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