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Band 4+: You are applying for a scholarship to study abroad. Write a letter to the scholarship committee applying for the award. You should include details about: - which course and country you wish to study in - why you deserve the scholarship - your academic achievements and future plans.

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Hello my name is Nikita i am from Kazakstan. I am a student who want to study abroad in English. I’m very a respose and cheerful person. I want to achieve my goals and show how it is important for me.

I know that study abtoad is terrible hard, but I am ready. I chose study in English due to it is main languages in the world witch can help me. I asssume that i deserved to be pick because i already have C1 English level.

In nowadays English the most popular language its native speakers or not account for 2 billions people around the world. It means that i can fluency speaking with all of them. Overall nobody knows what will be with the world so if somethink go wrong I will always can move abroad and live and study fluency. So English is the best way to improving your bolders.

In conclusion I want to say that i absolutely deserved the scholarship and i can fight for be picked.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

english: 5

study: 4

world: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements but contains several inaccuracies and irrelevant details. The introduction is present, but the explanation of why you deserve the scholarship is weak and includes irrelevant information about your personality. The benefits of studying English are mentioned but are not clearly linked to your future plans. To improve, focus on specific reasons why you deserve the scholarship (e.g., academic achievements, goals), and clearly outline how English will help your future career or studies. Avoid general statements and check for spelling and grammar errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. Ideas are presented in a disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the message. Consider organizing the letter into distinct paragraphs for each task point: introduction, reasons for deserving the scholarship, and future benefits. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several errors (e.g., 'respose', 'abtoad', 'asssume', 'pick', 'bolders'). There is an attempt to use some advanced words ('fluency', 'improving'), but they are used incorrectly. Focus on building a wider range of vocabulary and using words accurately. Avoid informal language like 'Hello' in a formal letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the letter, including subject-verb agreement ('student who want'), incorrect verb forms ('study abtoad'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive. Work on basic grammar rules and practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as complex and compound sentences.

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