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Band 7+: You are arranging a meeting with a potential client to discuss a new project. Write a letter to the client. You should include details about: - Propose a date, time and venue for the meeting. - Explain the purpose of the meeting. - What you would like them to bring to the meeting.

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I hope are doing well. I am writing to arrange a meeting with you to discuss the new project we talked about last week.

I would you like to propose meeting on Tuesday, 25 November, at 10.00 a.m. We meet in my office, which is located in the city centre and easy to reach by pubblic transport.

The purpose of the meeting is to through the main requirements of the project and to make sure we agree on the timeline and budget. I would also like to show you some first ideas and get your feedback.

Could you please bring any documents or exemples that show your company’s previous work? This will help us understand your style and expectations better.

Please let me know if the time work for you or if you prefer another day.

Kind regards

Loris

Word Count: 142

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

meeting: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, including proposing a meeting time, explaining the purpose, and specifying what to bring. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but they do not significantly detract from the overall quality and clarity of the letter. To improve, proofread carefully to eliminate such errors. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized with a clear purpose and logical flow. The paragraphing is adequate, but could be improved by ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. For example, the second paragraph could be split into two, one focusing on the date and time, and the other on the venue. Transition phrases could be added to enhance the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but there's room to incorporate more varied and precise language. For instance, instead of 'easy to reach by pubblic transport,' you could say 'easily accessible by public transport.' Consider using synonyms to elevate the language and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. For example, 'I hope are doing well' should be 'I hope you are doing well,' 'I would you like to propose' should be 'I would like to propose,' 'We meet' should be 'We can meet,' 'pubblic transport' should be 'public transport,' 'is to through' should be 'is to go through,' 'time work' should be 'time works,' and 'exemples' should be 'examples.' Proofreading carefully to correct these errors will significantly improve the grammatical accuracy.

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