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Band 5+: You are currently taking a course at a college, but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter: Give details of your course. Explain why you need a week off. Say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to request a week off due to a pressing family problem I have faced, which distrupt my concentartion on my course.

Curently, I am taking part in the AI course taught by Dr. Hashemi at Computer Science departemant every sanday and monday from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m .

The issue has comelled me to have a week off is my father illnesses. He suffers from a heart attackt that held yesterday. I must go to home and take him to a cardiologist, since my mother is very old, which makes it difficult to look after from my father.

I kindly urge that you allow me to go to home and lend a hand to my family. I would also appreciate it if you could premit me to participate in classes online.

Thank you very much for your consideration and time. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mohammadreza Hadavi

Word Count: 161

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by providing details about the course, explaining the reason for needing a week off, and stating what the writer wants the Dean to do. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the letter is clear and understandable. To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. For example, when explaining the reason for the leave, providing a clearer connection between the family problem and its impact on your studies would enhance coherence. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'pressing family problem,' consider using a more specific term like 'urgent family matter' or 'serious family emergency.' Also, vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, correct article usage (a/an/the), and subject-verb agreement. For example, 'distrupt my concentartion' should be 'disrupts my concentration,' and 'father illnesses' should be 'father's illness.' Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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