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Band 5+: You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you cannot pay the rent . When you will pay the rent. How you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future.

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Dear Madam.

I am writing in order to request that you allow me to pay my rent late this month.

The reason why I am not able to pay my current rent is that I am jobless. Recently, I was given out from my company and cannot find any other job still. If I have a chance to get into a new job, I go out from my current days of economic recession.

I assure you that I will be able to pay my rent towards the end of the month. I am searching for a new job, and when I start to work in a new profession, I may able to pay for it. If you can give me a chance to pay it by this deadline, I will have given advance wage and pay it as much as I would.

I can assure you that I will continue to pay rent at the full rate and on time in the future. As I mentioned, I am in the process of getting into a new company, which is called LG. Moreover, before I start to work in that position, I may set up a direct debit, meaning that the payment goes automatically each month.

I hope this will be acceptable to you, but please contact me if it is a problem.

Yours sincerely,

Azizxoja.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the reason for late rent payment, specifying when the rent will be paid, and outlining a plan to ensure timely payments in the future. However, the explanation of the financial problem could be more detailed and specific. It would be beneficial to provide more information about the efforts made to secure a new job.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure of introduction, body, and conclusion. However, there are some issues with sentence structure and clarity that affect the overall flow of the letter. Additionally, some ideas could be better connected for smoother transitions.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. More sophisticated and precise vocabulary could enhance the overall quality of the letter. Additionally, there are instances of repetition that could be avoided by using synonyms or varied expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Issues with verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and word choice impact the clarity and accuracy of the writing. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation would be beneficial.

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