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Band 4+: You are going to teach English to your friend's child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child; say when and where you will teach the child; explain what books you would like to borrow.

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Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I wanted to seek some advise and borrow some study material for teaching one of my friend’s child. I will be teaching english to him and I only could think about you in this matter due to your excellence in the course. He is only ten years old and facing some challenges in grammer portion. However, he is doing pretty good in other subjects.

I will be teaching him at my place and everthing is arranged already. I collected variety of grammer solving books. Once, i will be return from my work, then i will teach hime for 1 hour a day as like you use to do. Morevoer, i wanted to utilise the same techniques which you always tried on us and it is really easy and simple.

I wanted to request some books related to Grammatical Range & Accuracy, Lexical Resource and Dictionary.

I hope you will help me to teach a child and provide me with the books.

Yours sincerely,

Harshit Kaur

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

wanted: 3

teaching: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by requesting to borrow books for teaching a friend's child. However, more details about the child, the teaching schedule, and the specific books needed could be included for a more complete response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The flow could be improved by organizing the information into clearer paragraphs. Additionally, some sentences are unclear and need revision for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are misspelled ('advise' should be 'advice', 'grammer' should be 'grammar'). More sophisticated and accurate word choices could enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, the use of articles and prepositions needs improvement.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors present. Subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and punctuation errors need to be addressed for better accuracy. Proofreading for grammar is essential.

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Band 4+: You are going to teach English to your friend's child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child; say when and where you will teach the child; explain what books you would like to borrow.

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