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Band 6+: You are going to visit Manchester in the UK for a short training course but you have not arranged accommodation yet. Write a letter to the accommodation office of your future college. In your letter introduce yourself explain what type of accommodation you are looking for request information on that type of accommodation. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam

I am Juliana Devi Kurniawan, an international student from Indonesia University. I am going to join a short training course in Manchester, UK but unfortunately, I have not arranged my accomodation yet. Therefore, I am writing this letter to enquire your favor about this arangement while I am staying there.

I am looking a comfortable place, no matter it big or small, a long as near the course location, which is located in the city center. So that, I do not have to worry about the transport. As additional information, the price will not be a problem for me, however, I hope the place offers an affordable one.

If you do not mind, I will wait for your answer at Friday for the latest because I start the course at Monday.

Thank you in advance for your attention. I very much look forward to seeing your answer.

Best Regards,

Juliana Devi Kurniawan

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all the points in the task. It introduces the writer, explains the type of accommodation needed, and requests information. The letter is well-structured and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow. The use of commas and conjunctions could be improved for better clarity.

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The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances where more precise or formal language could be used. The writer demonstrates a good understanding of English vocabulary.

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The letter contains some grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and punctuation. The writer demonstrates a good understanding of grammar, but there are some areas for improvement.

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