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Band 5+: You are going to visit Manchester in the UK for a short training course but you have not arranged accommodation yet. Write a letter to the accommodation office of your future college. In your letter introduce yourself explain what type of accommodation you are looking for request information on that type of accommodation. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to inform you if I interest to joint with your a short training in Manchester you do. My name is Asriyanto from Indonesia. Currently I am a student in Hasanuddin university of south Celebes Indonesia.

As you know if this first time I travel to Manchester city, and than for this moments I am already have a visa travel to enter your country.

so that I need you assist me to looking for me a hotel or apartement closed from your training course placed for Single bed include breakfast and dinner with smoking room. On date 08 December 2024 until 10 December 2024 for three days on that hotel.

And also I need your team accomodation office to pick up me in Airport Manchester to the hotel. You can send to me all the price accomodatian and I Will pay by transfer banking to you.

Your assistance would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you very much for your time and hearing from you as soon as possible.

Your faithfully

Asriyanto

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Task Response

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The letter adequately addresses the task, but the information is not presented in a clear and concise manner. The letter could be improved by organizing the information more logically and using more formal language.

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The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. The letter could be improved by using more precise and formal language.

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