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Band 4+: You are organizing a surprise birthday party for a colleague at work and need to coordinate with other colleagues. Write a letter to your colleagues to make arrangements for the party. You should include details about: - the date, time, and location you have in mind - what kind of contribution you would like them to make (e.g., food, decorations, gifts) - how to keep the party a secret from the colleague

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Dear firand ,

how are you , and I want to everything is going well with you.

My best firand I want to tell you about planning a big party for my mom also I really need for you and your coordinate with other friends.

my best friend I would like to saking where I can organizing the party . this is very hard for me where I can chooes . becouse my beauty mom love comfortable place always especially outdoor form home .

naw I really like take this party on firday 2026,3,1 at a small restourans near the rever becaues the viow is more relxable and full of enger for her I will decoration around the restourands and will invit different famous person also some her best firends . She will be very happy and I love see my mom happy .

Now you most help me more becaues I havn not anther helper in my home. Also most to order the foods tidishtional food also you can being the food and decorated the hetal to when my mom arrivit she will very happy that time .t

this letter for yur dear pleas send a massage soom.

GOOD LUCK.

SABIRA

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 3

happy: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant information (planning a party for your mom instead of a friend). Key points are sometimes unclear and the letter is difficult to understand due to language errors. To improve, focus on directly addressing the task requirements, ensuring clarity in your writing, and proofreading for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the intended message. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. To improve, focus on creating a clearer structure with well-defined paragraphs, each addressing a specific aspect of the task. Use cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs, ensuring a smoother flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, limiting the letter's impact. There are instances of inaccurate word choice. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is appropriate for the context. Focus on learning synonyms and collocations to express ideas more precisely and avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structure is often awkward, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation. To improve grammatical accuracy, concentrate on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your confidence grows. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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