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Band 5+: You are organizing a weekend hiking trip with a local hiking club and want to invite a friend who is new to hiking. Write a letter to your friend inviting them on the hiking trip. You should include details about: - the location and difficulty level of the hike - what they need to bring (clothing, gear, etc.) - what to expect during the hike (e.g., scenery, challenges, duration)

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Dear Richard,

How are you? I hope your in a good condition right now. Recently, I was awarded by my employeer because I succesfully achieved my monthly qouta; I was able to sold a large number of our products. With that, some of our friends are planning a hiking trip this coming weekend to celebrate my accomplishment and im inviting you to come with us.

I know you’re new in hiking but if your up with it, majority of our friends decided to hike at Mt. Apo, and we already prepared everything including our transportation. And around 6:00 in the morning this coming Saturday, we’re gonna pick you up on your location and we will travel a couple of hour to arrive on the location. The terrain there will be rough and our hike will last a couple of hours, so please prepare your self, have a good sleep, and consider to bring extra clothes and water to avoid incovenience.

I am realy excited about this, and realy looking forward if you will consider my invitation and join us to celebrate and enjoy.

Best Wishes,

Neil

Word Count: 186

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7
The letter adequately addresses the task by inviting Richard on the hiking trip and including details about the location, gear, and planned activities. However, the letter could benefit from more specific details about the difficulty level of the hike and a more compelling description of what makes the trip special. Additionally, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter generally conveys the purpose of inviting Richard on a hiking trip, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. The introduction is a bit lengthy before getting to the main point of the invitation. Consider starting with the invitation and then providing the context. Transitions between ideas could be smoother to enhance the flow of the letter. For example, after mentioning the celebration, directly transition into the hiking trip details. Paragraphing is adequate, but ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the trip (e.g., location and difficulty, gear and clothing, activities).

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of saying 'in a good condition,' you could say 'doing well.' Instead of 'sold a large number of our products,' consider 'exceeded my sales targets significantly.' Using more descriptive words for the terrain and activities would also enrich the letter. For example, instead of 'The terrain there will be rough,' you could say 'The terrain is challenging, with steep inclines and rocky paths.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common errors include incorrect verb tenses ('I was awarded' should be 'I was awarded'), subject-verb agreement ('your' instead of 'you're'), and incorrect word usage ('qouta' should be 'quota,' 'employeer' should be 'employer,' 'incovenience' should be 'inconvenience,' 'realy' should be 'really'). There are also issues with sentence structure and punctuation. For example, the first sentence should end with a question mark. The sentence beginning with 'With that' is awkward and could be rephrased. Proofreading carefully for these types of errors will significantly improve the letter's grammatical accuracy.

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