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Band 5+: You are working for a company. You need some time off work and write letter your maneger

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Dear Mr Max,

I am writing to inquire about you may be grant me leave of absence a week.

I and may family going to go to New-York next week for christmas holiday because last day I decided to go somewhere with my family, which there are a number of things to christmas memories and I promised my family.

I would like you to give me some time off work and if you to allow this break , a week would be enough for me. I believe that within a week I will be able to do all my plans.

I promise you that this break will not any effect to my work because I have asked Jony to keep me going and he agreed to my question last week. In addition, I will do my work on online way in every second part of day.

I look forward to receiving a prompt reply!

Yours sincerely,

Yorqinbek.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by clearly stating the request for leave. However, the explanation could be more concise and professionally presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Some ideas are presented in a disjointed manner.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but more precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's professionalism. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate or informal.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and coherence. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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