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Band 9: You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Manager,

My name is John, and I am currently working as an Assistant Manager at Wipro. I would like to request leave from April 20th to April 30th due to a family commitment. Specifically, my sister is getting married, and as her only brother, I have many responsibilities to fulfill during this time.

I have several tasks to complete, including inviting relatives and friends. Additionally, I need to purchase items such as gold and dresses for my sister and family members and ensure our home and surroundings are well-prepared for the occasion.

During my absence, I will make sure to check my emails and communicate with the manager to keep everything on track. Upon my return, I am more than willing to work extra hours to catch up on any pending tasks.

I would be very grateful if you could grant me this time off. This occasion is incredibly special for my family and me, and I want to make it memorable by being present.

Thank you for considering my request.

Yours sincerely,

John

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