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Band 5+: You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do

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Dear ms. Chintya

i am writing this to announ you about the course cannot absent yesterday

Although we were course everyday, but yesterday cannot join the course because my full time job. since my full time job i cannot spare my time with course, if i do course at evening i am will tired.

However, i wanna change the time of course with my free day or my free time without crash my full time job. I think we can reschedule the course at weekend morning or evening, i appreciate if u agree with that day and not the time we can change again untill we deal.

I really enjoyed the course at evening before my job full time because spend time with you in course i am really get many experience so i dont wanna lost it. So to solve the problem change time or day is the best idea. I hope u can understand me

Yours sincerely,

Dama

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