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Band 5+: you have a problem with a recently hired employee in your workplace. write a letter to the HR MANAGER

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Dear sir,

I have problem with new employ you hire this guy recently in my company.The problem id that worker is so rudless talikng with everyone,slaying language used no manners in it.

So many problem has caused of this new employee everyday his complains from every staff worker no one is happy with this new worker.

In other words i woukd like to say other emloyees have so many issues with this employee because his behaviour is not good and slackker guy. In few days in this workplace he is not come to exact time everyday comes late and leaving every week is must. Other employess are too much frustrated with this new employee.

I would like to expect you to solve my problem in your way but I suggest you Hr manager you fired this guy and another guy appoint.By the way I know you manage very well so please you talk to him and solve this problem. I request you to solve this problem early because my work is distrubeD for some days of this situation.

Tanveer ahmed.

Your’s obediently,

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

problem: 6

other: 3

solve: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by clearly stating the problem with the new employee. However, it could benefit from a more structured and professional approach to presenting the information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and a lack of logical sequencing of ideas. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. A wider range of vocabulary and more sophisticated word choices would improve the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and overall impact. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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