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Band 4+: You have been looking for a job and have come across a job advertisement for a part-time position. write a letter to the employer. In your letter • explain why you need the job • describe your skills and qualifications • say what days you are available

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I,the undersigned,would like to inform you about the subject.

Yesterday, I have seen a job advertisment on the Billboard for part-time tutor in tution classes.I am extremely intrested in the position because of the job requirement align with my experience and skill set.I need to work in my speciality to share some knowledge also gain experience too,and earn money to afford my life expense.

I have a master’s degree in ‘Department of chemistry,’and more than two year of experience as a tutor in sahjanand classes. Through these year,I have learned more about the field .If to be able to get a position in a tutor in your tution classes.

Currently,I am studing in the P.Hd in organic chemistry,I have some time to work and I could be available evening from 05:00 PM to 08:00 PM.I will be glad if you offer me this position.I attached address copy for your reference.

Thanks for your time and consideration.I look forward to hear

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

tutor: 3

experience: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

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Lexical Resource

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