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Band 4+: You have been looking for a job and have come across a job advertisement for a part-time position. write a letter to the employer. In your letter • explain why you need the job • describe your skills and qualifications • say what days you are available

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Hello sir/ madam

I am writing about a part time job. Actually I Am looking for a part time job and from your advertisement I got to know about that position which you have advertised.

I am studying in Humber college as a chef. And I need part time job to fulfill my expenses and to fill my study fee. Apart from this I need job in your reputed hotel as a chef to gain more experience and knowledge about cooking.

Recently I am studying in Humber college and I done my master chef degree from Conestoga college in Toronto. I have more than 2 years of experience working as a chef in taj resort. And I have a certificate of chef which I got from that college.

As I am a student and I I can work part time Thursday to Sunday. I am Available in the evening time 2:00 pm to 8:00 pm.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

I am looking forward hearing from you soon.

Your faithfully

Kuldeep

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

college: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task. It clearly explains the need for the job, highlights relevant skills and qualifications, and specifies availability.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure and flow could be improved. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, and the overall message is not as clear as it could be.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of repetition and less precise word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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