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Band 7+: You have just learned that your friend got engaged. write a letter to friend.In your letter tell him how you found about it. explain how you feel about the news. Organise to meet your friend for celebration

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Dear Maham,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to congratulate you on getting engaged and want to let you know about the party I am arranging for you as a gift.

I know you must be worried about how I got to know about your engagement; so, let me clear about it very first, I saw your engagement pictures on your Instagram ID. Then, to confirm, I called Alina, our group member, and she confirmed it.

I am not going to lie about my feelings and I’m so happy for you guys. At the same time, I was shocked after knowing you got engaged to your love. The tears started falling out of my eyes while I imagined you committed to live together for the rest of life.

I just want to celebrate this moment, cherish the news and make it memorable time for both of you. I have selected a sea view restaurant for celebration and already booked the date which is 15th of November. You will have a chance to meet your class fellows and other group members as I invited them as well. Make sure to bring your family and we would have great fun together. Give my salam to your family.

Kind regards,

Kinza

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Overall Band Score

7
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
about: 5
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Task Response

8
The letter appropriately addresses all three task requirements: it explains how the news was discovered (via Instagram and a friend's confirmation), expresses feelings (happiness and shock), and organizes a celebration (a booked restaurant on a specific date). The tone is warm and personal, fitting the context. Minor lapses include a slight lack of clarity in the opening (the party is mentioned before the news is explained) and a small grammatical issue ('let me clear about it very first'). To improve, ensure the sequence of information flows logically and proofread for minor errors. Overall, the response is relevant, sufficient, and well-structured.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs are logically structured, covering the three required points. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition from expressing feelings to organizing the celebration. Consider using linking phrases like 'To celebrate this wonderful news...' to improve flow.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary is appropriate and conveys the intended meaning effectively. Phrases like 'tears started falling out of my eyes' and 'make it memorable time' show good effort, but some expressions could be more natural. For example, 'let me clear about it very first' could be rephrased as 'let me clarify it first.' Overall, the lexical range is adequate for the task. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For instance, 'I am writing this letter to congratulate you... and want to let you know' should be 'and to let you know.' Also, 'I was shocked after knowing' could be 'I was shocked to learn.' Punctuation is mostly correct, but the sentence 'The tears started falling out of my eyes while I imagined you committed to live together for the rest of life' is grammatically flawed. Improving sentence structure and accuracy would enhance the overall quality.

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