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Band 6+: You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party you are worried that the noise disturb your neighbour write a letter to your neighbour Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Hashemi,

I hope this letter finds you well.

I am Mohammadreza Hadavi your flat 2 neighbour ,and I am writing regarding upcoming event that I have planned to hold on september 25 at night from 8 pm to 1 am.

I have considered to cleberate my 30 brithday party with my friends and relatives. This event will be accompany with a wide range of entertainments, such as dancing, fireworks and singing. Consequently, it will be too noisy and can distrup your tranquility, which I really sorry for this.

I would appreciate if you could attend in my party to share memorable and delightful moments with each other. Moreover, it would be a great opportunity to strengthen our bonds and experience engaging moments.

Thank you for your consideration and time. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you and I hope this small gathering party provides fascinating memento for you.

Yours faithfully,

Mohammadreza Hadavi

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, introducing yourself, describing the party plans, and extending an invitation. The tone is polite and considerate. To improve, consider adding specific details about noise mitigation efforts (e.g., ending fireworks at a certain time) to further demonstrate consideration for your neighbor.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is adequate, but consider breaking up longer paragraphs for better readability. The purpose of the letter is clear, but some sentences are a bit wordy and could be more concise.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some instances where more natural or precise word choices could be used. For example, 'cleberate' should be 'celebrate' and 'distrup' should be 'disrupt'. Expanding your range of vocabulary would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'flat 2 neighbour' should be 'your neighbour from flat 2'. Also, 'This event will be accompany with' should be 'This event will be accompanied by'. Pay closer attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct spelling to improve accuracy.

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