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Band 5+: You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party you are worried that the noise disturb your neighbour write a letter to your neighbour Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Neighbour,

Mr Gautam Kumar, I am your neighbour, and actually, we will organise the party next Sunday. I have an invitation to the party, come with all family members. I have invited every society member to this party. We are organising a mini party at home.

I have organised a music party at night where people can enjoy the party and also some games for children and women. There is also dinner for everyone at night. We will take care of the sound level for the music party because I know people are having trouble with the increase in the sound system. I will close the sound system around 10.00 clock

I request that all your family members attend the party. I hope you and your family member will enjoy the party.

Thank you so much for your understanding and support, and we sincerely hope to see you at the party

Best regards,

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
party: 8
family: 3
sound: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

7
The letter addresses all parts of the task, introducing yourself, describing the party plans, and inviting the neighbor. There are some minor areas for improvement. For example, the tone could be more consistently polite and formal, and some sentences could be structured more effectively for clarity. Also, consider adding specific details to make the invitation more appealing.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. The introduction is abrupt, and the transition between introducing yourself, describing the party plans, and inviting the neighbor is not smooth. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your ideas and create a more logical flow. For example, you could start by introducing yourself and then smoothly transition into explaining the reason for your letter, which is the upcoming party. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary used is relatively simple and could be enhanced to provide a more detailed and engaging description of the party. While the language is functional, incorporating a wider range of vocabulary would make the letter more descriptive and appealing. For example, instead of saying 'music party,' you could use 'lively musical entertainment.' Instead of 'people can enjoy the party,' you could say 'guests can revel in the festivities.' Also, avoid repetition of words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and punctuation. For example, the sentence 'Mr Gautam Kumar, I am your neighbour, and actually, we will organise the party next Sunday' is awkwardly phrased and contains unnecessary commas. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation to enhance the grammatical accuracy of your writing. Proofreading carefully before submitting your letter can help identify and correct these errors.

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