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Band 7+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir,

I hope you are doing well,

I am reaching out to you to express my concerns with regards to a column written by one of your writers in your esteemed magazine, The Traveller, latest issue of October 26th, 2025.

I am a huge fan of Dr. Meghani’s writing, her columns are really astonishing and informative to read. But her recent work was not really up to the mark. She wrote about her visit to Gandhinagar, which by the way is where I am from, she wrote about the Saraswati Kunj festival, and how it is celebrated in the whole town and it is unique in its own way. But she mentioned that it is owned and managed by the local government, which is completely wrong, it is managed by the local shops and businesses.

I can understand that it is a very minute detail and she might have made a mistake gathering the information, however, I do want the world and future generations to gain the correct information about this festival. Therefore, if you could make the necessary changes in this article and republish it in the next issue, that would be really appreciated by me and the people of my town.

Yours sincerely,

Torande.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task. The corrections are clearly stated, the importance of accuracy is explained, and a suggestion for resolution is provided. The tone is consistently polite and professional. To improve, ensure that all details are factually accurate and that the language used is precise and unambiguous.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and the progression of ideas is logical. However, consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the flow and connection between sentences and paragraphs. For example, you could use transition words or phrases to signal the relationship between ideas more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using appropriate and relevant words to convey the message. However, there are opportunities to enhance the lexical resource by incorporating more precise or sophisticated vocabulary related to the topic of correcting information and the impact of misinformation. For example, instead of 'minute detail,' you could use 'critical inaccuracy' or 'significant misrepresentation.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a strong command of grammar and sentence structure, with only minor errors that do not impede understanding. The sentences are generally well-constructed and grammatically accurate. To further enhance the grammatical range, consider incorporating more complex sentence structures or varied grammatical forms where appropriate. Pay close attention to the accuracy of verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

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