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Band 5+: You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card, However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Victor Budynski, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about missing my credit card.

A few weeks ago on my vacation in the Dominican Republic my wallet was stolen. When I call the info line, they help me to lock my card, and I get information that in about a few or three weeks I can get my new credit card, but my waiting time was extended by the strike of Canada post, and I was waiting one month for my card. I could understand you about the situation with the Canada post, but I was baffled because you sent me an empty envelope.

How can you explain this situation?

Please tell me what you will do next?

Should I wait again one or two months?

I hope you can find an opportunity to send me my credit card as soon as possible. Because if not I would like to close my bank account at this bank. Because the service is bad.

Sincereli,

Victor Budynski.

Word Count: 170

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

credit: 3

because: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The explanation is clear, the concern is expressed, and a request for action is made. However, some aspects could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and more logical sequencing of ideas. The numerous grammatical errors negatively impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but the range could be broader. More precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact. Some word choices are slightly informal for a formal letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score. A wider range of grammatical structures would also be beneficial.

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