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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the museum shop during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the museum shop. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir or madair

I am john smith and I am writing to apply for the recruitment in the city museum Shop, on the holidays a I have seen advertisement in the newspaper. I am currently studying In the University and my subjects are english and history. I am Interested to apply and gain experience during my holidays.

I have experience in library, where I guied costumer to find the book, making Books entries and having transactions counter, and I have well and fluent communication skills in english and I am very active during the working time especially at busy hours and I can explain any thing if i read about the meseum things.

I am Intrested in this job because i like to Know about the history and also share the Knowledge with other, as History was my favorate Subject. and, i would help people and also myself to know more about the museum.

Thank you for considering my application. I would be grateful for the getting the opportunite to discuss in detail with the museum Visitors

yours faithfully,

john smith.

Word Count: 182

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
history: 3
about: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter adequately addresses the task by introducing yourself, explaining your experience and skills, and stating your interest in the job. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the letter is clear and understandable. To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs. For example, transition words and phrases can help guide the reader through your letter. Additionally, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the range needed to express ideas effectively. To improve, try to incorporate more varied and specific vocabulary related to the job and your skills. For instance, instead of 'I like to know about history,' you could say 'I am passionate about historical knowledge.' Expanding your vocabulary will make your letter more engaging and demonstrate a better command of the English language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'I guied costumer' should be 'I guided customers,' and 'on the holidays a I have seen' should be 'during the holidays, as I have seen.' Proofreading carefully and practicing grammar exercises can help reduce these errors.

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