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Band 5+: You have seen and advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore.Write a letter to the bookstore manager

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Dear sir or Madam

I am writing in your response to your advertisement due to I would appreciate your help for my improvement of experience of work. I believe that crossing words with people will give me a bit of confidence for a future, in addition I have been looking for a job in my part-time to conclude my activities for the week.

In the other hand the money gained is leaded for my personal occupation as well as projects from my university,transport or any emergency

Likewise my differents work places had given me many ideas of managing money,good relations with co-workers and withing security of the building too and if you had searched a leader you would have founded also you could be chilling out if you leave me in charge.

As you can see my charges have been many due to my flexibility with anything. As well as I recognize my mistakes and receive well the critics of my feedbacks

I look forward to your reply

Yours faithfully

Laura Garzón

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing interest in the advertised part-time job. However, it could benefit from a more direct and concise presentation of the candidate's skills and experience.

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4.5

The letter's message is somewhat difficult to follow due to organizational and grammatical issues. Improving the flow and structure would enhance clarity and coherence.

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The letter demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary, but more precise word choices and a more consistent tone would improve the overall impact.

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Grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall quality and impact of the letter. Significant improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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