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Band 4+: You have seen and advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore.Write a letter to the bookstore manager

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Dear sir, yours faithfully, I saw in a newspaper and advertisement of your bookstore and I saw that you need an employer for a part-time job, and I am interested in that work.

That is my dreaming work, I love the books and stay in calm on the bookstores, also I think that books is the best form to imagine things and open our mind, I think you have to chose me because I am a good ambient with people and if they need something I give to they with all my respect and also I am so calm.

If you consider I am a good option we can see us to an interview all week but in the night I can´t, I hope you considere my propose.

I look forward to your reply, yours fathfully.

Bye.

Laura.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing interest in the advertised position. However, it could benefit from a more structured and detailed presentation of the candidate's qualifications and suitability. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is somewhat understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and organizational issues. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is simple but generally appropriate for the context. Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for enhancing the overall quality.

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