Letter

Band 4+: You left your phone at a local cafe yesterday. You want to write to the manager about your lost phone. Write a letter to the cafe manager. In your letter, you should: - Describe the phone in detail - Explain where and when you think you left it - Ask them to contact you if found and provide your contact information

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Dear the Manager,

I am writing this letter to inform your about losting my phone in your cafe.

This moring around 10 am. I went to your cafe at 30 AA road, and I ordered a breakfast and coffee. I sat on a meeting room at the corner with my friend. we was finished our coffee and we leaved around 11 am. However, when I went home and I can not found my phone which I surely I lost in your restaurant at a table. My phone is black colour and it was specific phonecase in pink colour.

I would appriciate it if you contact me if you see it. My phone number is 02122343. I look forward to your prompt respond.

Kind regards,

Word Count: 125

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

phone: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, describing the phone, explaining the likely location and time of the loss, and providing contact information. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading for grammatical accuracy. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of information could be improved. Consider using more effective transitions between sentences and paragraphs to guide the reader. For example, you could start a new paragraph when you transition from describing your visit to describing the phone itself. Also, ensure that each sentence logically follows from the previous one to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to describing objects and situations. For example, instead of just saying 'specific phonecase,' you could describe the material or design of the phone case. Expanding your vocabulary will make your writing more engaging and accurate. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving your sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'losting' should be 'losing,' and 'we was finished' should be 'we had finished' or 'we were finished.' Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will help improve accuracy.

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