Letter

Band 6+: You recently attended a short course or workshop that greatly benefited you. Write a letter to a friend recommending they take the same course/workshop. You should include details about: - what the course/workshop was about - why you found it so helpful - where and when they can take the course/workshop.

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My dear friend,

I hope this letter finds you well! I’m really excited to tell about a course which i attended recently and I believe, you should join the course.

The course i attended was about public speaking and the instructors are really amazing. In this course, they focus on how to improve individuals confidence, body language, and technique.The facility is really beautiful and they provide insentives to every students who finishes the course, in addition they will give a certificate if you pass the final exam.

I found it really helpful because it has improved my public speaking skill by a large margin. They taught me how to be more confident while talking by creating random senario. Moreover, they would give us topics to practice at home. The next day we had to stand in front of the class and talk and talk about that specific topic for three minutes, as a result you become more confident and get better at public speaking.

In my opinion, you should join the class brcause i know you suffer from social anxiety and you are frightened to talk with strangers. I’m certain that this course will help you substaincially.

I hope, you will understand the benefit of this course and enroll in the next class.Warm regards

Sakib

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 6

really: 4

about: 3

public: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, describing the course, explaining its benefits, and encouraging the friend to take it. The content is relevant and sufficient. To further improve, ensure consistent accuracy in grammar and word choice throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect ideas smoothly. For example, in the second paragraph, you could add a phrase like 'Furthermore' or 'Additionally' to introduce the incentive provided to students. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more varied and precise language. For instance, instead of saying 'really amazing,' you could use 'exceptional' or 'outstanding.' Similarly, replace 'by a large margin' with a more specific phrase like 'significantly' or 'noticeably.' Expanding your vocabulary will make your writing more engaging and effective.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation. For example, 'I'm really excited to tell about a course which i attended recently' should be 'I'm really excited to tell you about a course which I attended recently.' Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors.

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