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Band 4+: You recently attended a short course or workshop that greatly benefited you. Write a letter to a friend recommending they take the same course/workshop. You should include details about: - what the course/workshop was about - why you found it so helpful - where and when they can take the course/workshop.

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Hi my dear friend

I really exciting to write to you again. Recently I was attended a workshop and I found this so beneficial for me and my shedule. Basically this work is about working with people therefore for me its very spectural worktime. Definitely this work not for everybody espesially for people who have a weak psychology brain. Indeed I have never believed that in 2025 I will working here, it is so spectural to work by this job.

This work is very helpful in our time. It is about situations in ours psychology problems. Really I cant believe how we lived without this job in the past, without any help, any good people with which you can talk in different ways. We cant rely on only on ourself it is too hard in current time, with wars, viruses etc. Especially in our world.

So, do you want to visit the next session? Trust me please it have to be very interesting about psychologist and other jobs. It does not waste a lot of time, only 30-40 minutes. But after this session I understood my future and what I’d want to be.

I will wait for your answer!

Bye!

Your friend!!

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Task Response

The letter generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some areas where it could be improved. The explanation of the workshop's content is somewhat vague, and the reasons for its helpfulness could be more specific. The letter also contains some irrelevant information and grammatical errors. To improve, focus on providing clear and detailed explanations, using accurate language, and ensuring the letter is well-organized and easy to understand.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the progression of ideas. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate distinct points. The introduction and conclusion are basic, and transitions between ideas are abrupt. To improve, focus on creating a clearer structure with well-defined paragraphs, using transitional phrases to connect ideas, and ensuring a logical flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range and accuracy. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('spectural,' 'psychology brain') and imprecise language. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to the topic, focusing on accurate and appropriate word choice. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to convey your ideas effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('I was attended'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and proofreading carefully for errors. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct mistakes.

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