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Band 5+: You recently attended a workshop that a local community center organized, and you were very impressed. Write a letter to the community center. - Thank them for organizing the workshop. - Describe what you enjoyed most about it. - Suggest topics for future workshops.

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Dear Sara!

I am writing to thank you for facial aesthetic workshop which was organised by you on last Saturday. It was such a valuaable seminar. The lectures by professional professors almost cover all aspects of aesthetics and they share knowledge about the new innovation and medicines in this field. I found this workshop very beneficial for my career growth and help me to pass my exams of facial aesthetic diploma. At last the question answer session was very useful in exchanging views of audience and make them more clear

I believe that you should also include the hands on practice and some practical activities to make the participant more engaging and make learning in a more appropriate way.

I appreciate if you organized a workshop on microneedling topic as these days they are considered very vital procedures in aesthetic field and we also get a chance to learn a lot in this way hope you consider my request

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aesthetic: 3

workshop: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three task requirements: expressing appreciation for the workshop, suggesting an improvement (hands-on practice), and proposing a future topic (microneedling). The tone is appropriate and the content is relevant. However, there are some lapses in clarity and organization. For improvement: ensure the letter is structured with clear paragraphs, correct the salutation (use 'Dear [Name],' with a comma), and proofread for grammatical errors (e.g., 'valuaable' → 'valuable', 'organised by you on last Saturday' → 'you organised last Saturday').

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable but lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The ideas are presented in a single block, making it hard to follow. Consider separating the letter into distinct paragraphs: one for appreciation and useful aspects, one for improvement suggestions, and one for future workshop topics. Use linking words like 'firstly', 'moreover', 'however', and 'finally' to improve cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'valuaable', 'professors', 'innovation and medicines'). There is some attempt at formal language, but it is inconsistent. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'valuable', 'experts', 'innovations and treatments', and 'engaging'. Avoid repetition and ensure word forms are correct.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('lectures... cover'), tense inconsistency ('help me to pass'), and missing articles ('facial aesthetic workshop'). Punctuation is also problematic (e.g., missing periods, incorrect exclamation mark). To improve, review basic grammar rules, use a variety of sentence structures, and proofread for errors. Consider using complex sentences with subordinate clauses.

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