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Band 4+: You recently attended a workshop that a local community center organized, and you were very impressed. Write a letter to the community center. - Thank them for organizing the workshop. - Describe what you enjoyed most about it. - Suggest topics for future workshops.

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Dear Sri or madam,

I am writing to my quite disappointed in Thai food workshop that I attended at the green house community center on November 17th.

Firstly, the content was different from mail. I expected advance ingredients but the ingredients is basic and not fresh. Secondly, the workshop team hasn’t friendly and location is not to do food workshop this place is dirty and not convenient.

Due to these problems, I think the workshop improves content should be interesting and correct, ingredients must to use fresh and new also the place for food workshop should be convenient and clean.

I would like to request a full refund of my fee. You can contact me this email.

I look forward to hearing from you soon

Yours faithfully,

Patraporn

Word Count: 128

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

workshop: 5

ingredients: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining which workshop was attended, describing the disappointing aspects, and suggesting improvements. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and ensuring grammatical accuracy. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to separate distinct points. To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the task and uses clear transitions between ideas. For cohesion, use connecting words and phrases to link sentences and paragraphs smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey the writer's disappointment effectively. There is limited use of varied vocabulary. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words related to the workshop experience. For example, instead of 'dirty,' use more descriptive terms like 'unsanitary' or 'poorly maintained.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structure is often flawed, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on constructing grammatically correct sentences and proofread carefully for errors. Practice using a wider range of sentence structures to add complexity and sophistication to your writing.

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