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Band 7+: You recently bought a children's toy online but when it arrived it was damaged. Write a letter to the manager of the toy shop. In your letter: describe what the problem with the toy is suggest how the damage may have happened say what you would like the manager to do

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I recently ordered a remote control car from your online store, Kids Toy Collection, through Amazon. I would like to bring to your attention that the product I received is unfortunately faulty. The car is a vibrant blue color, featuring two headlights at the front and taillights at the back. It came with a remote control that seems to be functioning correctly.

However, upon trying to operate the car, I found that while the lights illuminate when I press the button, the car itself does not move in response to the remote commands. This issue is quite disappointing, as I had planned to gift this toy to my younger cousin for his birthday on February 20th.

Given the circumstances, I kindly request either a replacement for the faulty car or a full refund so that I can select a different gift. I appreciate your attention to this matter and look forward to your prompt response.

Best regards,

Adit Mahi

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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the problem is clear, and a solution is proposed. However, a more detailed explanation of how the damage may have occurred could improve the response.

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The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. Ideas flow logically, and the paragraphs are well-structured. The cohesion is excellent.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate. While there is a good range of words, using more precise and vivid language could enhance the letter's impact.

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The grammar is largely accurate and demonstrates a good range of structures. Minor errors are present but do not impede understanding.

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