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Band 6+: You recently bought a piece of Sports Equipment from an online Store. when you first used to the piece of Sports Equipment you found a problem with it. write a letter to the manager of the online store in your letter, describe the problem with the piece of Sports Equipment say what happened because of the problem explain what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in regards to the tennis racket that I purchased from your online store. When it arrived, I noticed that the quality of strings on the racket is not worth the price that I ended up paying for. I have an upcoming tennis tournament in about a week from now, for which I intended to play with the new tennis racket for.

I would like to either exchange the tennis racket with another similar type one or get a refund of the price that I paid for it. It would be really great it could get either of the two suggested solutions done in my case. Please revert to me at my email address or phone number which is 123 456 789 at your earliest convenience.

Your Sincerely,

Austin Shiva Kumar

Word Count: 137

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
tennis: 4
racket: 4
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Task Response

6.5
The letter effectively addresses the task by describing the problem, explaining the consequences, and stating the desired resolution. However, it could be improved by providing more specific details about the problem with the strings. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are a bit awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

6.5
The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some phrases could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5
The letter demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, but there are a few minor errors that affect the overall fluency.

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