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Band 5+: You recently bought a product online that arrived damaged. Write a letter to the company you bought it from. - Explain what you bought and when it arrived. - Describe the damage. - Explain what action you would like them to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you due to a goods damaged from your company. I recently bought a long pants on Monday, 22 September 2029. I am so exited about my long pants has arrived, but there are problems when it come to my home.

Although, my delivered has arrived but there is a hole in the middle under between two feet in my long pants, which is very uncomfortable for me because of that damage in my product, and that product not suitable for my size because of that I am not wear it.

However, as a customer from your company, I would like to request replacement for the item that I purchased, and could you give me more information to get that replacement from your company. I would appreciate it if you could kindly respond to this matter at your earliest convinience.

Yours Faithfully,

Ronaldo

Word Count: 157

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

company: 3

pants: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, explaining the purchase, describing the damage, and stating the desired action. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider starting with a clear statement of purpose. Use more precise transitions between ideas to enhance flow. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to this' or 'Therefore' to connect your sentences and paragraphs more logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more specific and varied language to describe the damage and your desired action. For example, instead of 'a hole,' you could say 'a large tear.' Using a wider range of vocabulary will make your letter more descriptive and engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'goods damaged' should be 'damaged goods,' and 'I am so exited' should be 'I am so excited.' Proofreading carefully will help reduce these errors.

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